Edit with us pt. 2
Hey guys! We are almost done with our commercial. I asked a few of my classmates what they thought about it. I decided it would be a good idea to get the opinion of someone who has never seen the commercial before. I decided to take a survey to get different opinions. They all loved it but most of them said that there was room for improvement. Some said it was hard to understand the message since there was no dialogue. My group and I discussed what we could do to improve the commercial. I decided to have Ben record a voiceover that I would edit in after. Ben and I wrote dialogue to better explain what is going on. He recorded it and I edited it into the video. We were going for a more persuasive commercial. We stated reasons why Jansport is the best backpack brand. We thought it would be entertaining to have the commercial be based in a school setting with students. We were going for a more comedic message hence the language in the dialogue. We thought it would be more appealing to students if it was based in a school setting. The editing was very enjoyable and I'm excited about the next project. I'll be sure to show you guys soon! I wonder what we will work on next! I can't wait!
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